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tu_uilwentu_uilwen Member Posts: 794
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 http://kenshinxhimuraxx.deviantart.com/

This is my first good anime drawing...please tell me what you think.....

I printed out a pic and copied it..becasue I am new to drawing anime and I am trying ot get better.........so pelase tell me what you think

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"Everyones life has a beginning and an end, No one can change that."-Hiko

"If you wish to taste the ground, then feel free to attack."-Kenshin Himura
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WoW
-Rhalon 85 B.E. rogue
-Rhalon 81 UD Mage
-Doneski 85 Orc death knight

"Everyones life has a beginning and an end, No one can change that."-Hiko
"If you wish to taste the ground, then feel free to attack."-Kenshin Himura
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  • DarqueLordDarqueLord Member Posts: 195

    Its pretty good for one of your first ones.

    Suggestions:

    1) the neck looks a bit long to me, but it could be just the way he is standing.

    2) you do need more practice on the shoes! and the lines on the pants are a bit too straight.

    3) the arms look to be different lenghts

    4) MOST IMPORTANT SUGGESTION! If you get flamed, ignore it. Take only the suggestions you believe will help you. Because this is YOUR art, if you are happy with it, then that is all that matters.

    PS I cant draw a circle to save my life lol

  • bobblerbobbler Member UncommonPosts: 810

    as jim up there said the neck is ot long..yes but only by about 1-2 cm

    and the right pantleg is great but the left one needs more physics applied like make hte line come in a bit more because hte angle of his leg. and make the shoes a bit more non platformed otherwise yoru drawing is very good image

     

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  • vrtldavevrtldave Member Posts: 558
    liek everyone else said it pretty good for first try.. but it really not working for me to much.. hope you do better one soon image... I suck a lot at drawing but still draw for fun... yo better then me... I think that says a lot... but nice try keep it up... I bet you could do much better image

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  • KiamdeKiamde Member CommonPosts: 5,820

    I don't like it.


    It just looks fugly. I can't stand anime and it has so much less in it than real art.

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  • tu_uilwentu_uilwen Member Posts: 794


    Originally posted by DarqueLord

    Its pretty good for one of your first ones.
    Suggestions:
    1) the neck looks a bit long to me, but it could be just the way he is standing.
    2) you do need more practice on the shoes! and the lines on the pants are a bit too straight.
    3) the arms look to be different lenghts
    4) MOST IMPORTANT SUGGESTION! If you get flamed, ignore it. Take only the suggestions you believe will help you. Because this is YOUR art, if you are happy with it, then that is all that matters.
    PS I cant draw a circle to save my life lol


    Really you think the arms look alittle it uneven?......maybe its because of his posture and the way he is standing??? I don't know.....but thats cool.......

    and to everyone else thx for the feed back....I appreciate it...I will try to post up more pics as soon as I can get some up...later

    ---------------------------------------------
    "Everyones life has a beginning and an end, No one can change that."-Hiko

    "If you wish to taste the ground, then feel free to attack."-Kenshin Himura
    ---------------------------------------------

    ---------------------------------------------
    WoW
    -Rhalon 85 B.E. rogue
    -Rhalon 81 UD Mage
    -Doneski 85 Orc death knight

    "Everyones life has a beginning and an end, No one can change that."-Hiko
    "If you wish to taste the ground, then feel free to attack."-Kenshin Himura
    ---------------------------------------------
    image

  • EnigmaEnigma Member UncommonPosts: 11,384

    Hey

    Here's a little doodle I did at my office last year:

    If you wanna PM about coloring advice or anything else lemme know.  (I call this a doodle as I didn't put much coloring effort into it as with my previous ones)

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    BTW, Kareal is my wife's name in virtually every mmorpg.  So if you see her, give her a wave. Right now she's only playing EVE. I drew this of her when we were both playing FFXI

    Originally posted by WizGamer
    Now hear me out, its just an opinion, I don't want yours. .
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    People who have to create conspiracy and hate threads to further a cause lacks in intellectual comprehension of diversity.

  • tu_uilwentu_uilwen Member Posts: 794

    Wow dude...even th o i only saw half the pic...that looked like it was really good lol......you should IM me some time.....we could jsut talk and chill......and you should maybe even thiokning of joining deviantart.com...

    idk...well g2g...later

    ---------------------------------------------
    "Everyones life has a beginning and an end, No one can change that."-Hiko

    "If you wish to taste the ground, then feel free to attack."-Kenshin Himura
    ---------------------------------------------

    ---------------------------------------------
    WoW
    -Rhalon 85 B.E. rogue
    -Rhalon 81 UD Mage
    -Doneski 85 Orc death knight

    "Everyones life has a beginning and an end, No one can change that."-Hiko
    "If you wish to taste the ground, then feel free to attack."-Kenshin Himura
    ---------------------------------------------
    image

  • EnigmaEnigma Member UncommonPosts: 11,384


    Originally posted by tu_uilwen

    Wow dude...even th o i only saw half the pic.

    there's a little scroll bar under my post....that'll show you the rest of the pic

    Originally posted by WizGamer
    Now hear me out, its just an opinion, I don't want yours. .
    image

    People who have to create conspiracy and hate threads to further a cause lacks in intellectual comprehension of diversity.

  • DarkSithDarkSith Member Posts: 2
    It's good in some ways & sucks a lil cause you need to fix some stuff  ....  image
  • EnigmaEnigma Member UncommonPosts: 11,384

    which pic? Mine or Tu?

    Originally posted by WizGamer
    Now hear me out, its just an opinion, I don't want yours. .
    image

    People who have to create conspiracy and hate threads to further a cause lacks in intellectual comprehension of diversity.

  • jayheld90jayheld90 Member UncommonPosts: 1,726
    good drawing, doesnt really look anime style to me though. either way its a great drawing.

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