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Poems!

I loved the child in him
so innocent and sweet
The mischief in his eyes
the blush upon his cheek
The tender way he spoke
that showed me that he cared
The touch of his warm hand
that gently touched my hair
The smiles that we shared
that filled my life with glee
For when I was with him
I found the child in me

Poem 2#
Temptation was inviting, but no words needed to be said,
So, nervously I sat down again, on the edge of the warm, familiar bed.
Oh, I knew well all the pleasures from so many times before,
But, feebly I resisted the giving in that one time more.

"Maybe tomorrow, when I've recovered," I said, but both of us knew I lied.
Temptation had seduced me and I trembled while I sighed.
As, at last, I slowly gave in, I knew it was being shallow
To succumb to the wonderful pleasures of
my last, sweet, soft... marshmallow.

Comments

  • EnigmaEnigma Member UncommonPosts: 11,384

    I believe the first poem to be written by Jean Gabore

    However...he is not taking credit for this work so all in all, he can post it.  If he does takes credit for the work, then we would need to take action.

     

    So far, no action needs to be taken

    People who have to create conspiracy and hate threads to further a cause lacks in intellectual comprehension of diversity.

  • BlueCoyoteBlueCoyote Member Posts: 244

    http://www.mmorpg.com/discussion.cfm/load/forums/loadforum/51/loadthread/69912/setstart/1/loadclass/35


    Im going to quit writing them and start working on my 4th 60! :P And start writing poems..

    Screw this,I agree with slap,Im gunna start working on my 4th 60 and start writing poems in the off topic discussion! :P

    If that isn't taking credit for these stolen works, I don't know what is. CrazyMonk, you are one screwed up individual. If you did things like this in real life, you would be taken to court.

  • OrccOrcc Member Posts: 3,043


    Originally posted by Enigma
    I believe the first poem to be written by Jean Gabore
    However...he is not taking credit for this work so all in all, he can post it. If he does takes credit for the work, then we would need to take action.

    So far, no action needs to be taken

    I guess he didnt state that hes taking credit for them, but without giving the original poet or writer a reference or some kind of credit, it is still blatant plagarism.

    I dont care if you ban him or anything, this guy is just getting a little ridiculous in terms of the amount of articles and writings that hes ripped off, numerous times stating that he is the author.

    Monk, you need to stop ripping people off, or no one is ever goign to take you seriously and any decent writing you post is going to be assumed to be ripped off, wether people can find the original source or not.

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  • Rikimaru_XRikimaru_X Member UncommonPosts: 11,718

    Orcc is right. It's plagarism and you can still get in trouble for that.

    -In memory of Laura "Taera" Genender. Passed away on Aug/13/08-
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  • BoozbazBoozbaz Member Posts: 1,918

    Why would he even...? yeah I agree it's plagerism withought any reference to the original author...besides why would you spam us with poetry? Are you trying to look deep?

    I liked the first poem but my overall reaction is- meh.

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